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[EgoCity Chap V disk2]

Ugh

I give you the 6 points on one thing, the animation.

Music: No, plz, make something original enough not to be forced to come up w/ copying from other series/genres. I made the movie so damn cliche, it was hard to follow the entire movie w/o wanting to through up from lack of originality.

Story: Eh, decent. Annoying, because once again, lack of personality. Three strong sources of energy, (Triforce?)

Flow: To damn fast, you obviously didn't watch the flow of the movie to let plots develope overtime.

Animation: Great, but you obviously got lazy at some points

Voice Acting: No, absolutly horrible, hire someone if you need to, hell ppl like to do that kind of stuff for free!

Really, a nice series, could do better.

[Total NS Collab]

Erm no.

A great song, only to be ruined by an amatuer collab, Why does only the .swfer get credit for this collab? Not cool.

And no, avatar would get owned in a fight.

[Super Mario Hyadain]

Loved it

A great original flash including not only anime, not only japanese, but also Mario!
Nice!

Great job!

[There She Is!! step3]

OMG YES YES YES!

4.73!!! HELL YA!

I love this stuff!
Keep up the perfect work!

[Stick Town. PREVIEW]

Yeah I'm good.

If I was 13 still, I'd remember to actually make good, non-shitty submissions before I say stuff like,"Wanna be a pro like me? Tough." Especially when your rather pathetic.

Better luck next time, pro.

[Indiada Jodes]

Indiana Jones - Great

I loved your parody of Irod Bad lol
My friends were debating which one was better, But I believe this parody was better =D

[Can we have sex?]

Lol loved it.

I'm starting to see more and more of your work, and watching it get better and better is nice.

I liked the concept, but NO guy would ever play video games in subject to having sex w/ his GF, well, from what I know.

Gate-keeper-girl responds:

He would do it just for the sake of doing it.
That's our little inside joke.

-GKG

[Tankmen Infinity]

Perfect

The story was compiled well, I love how you made it seem like it was going to end just to go back into him screaming out of pain, Beautiful.

[Wii vs PS3]

First Flash? Nice

Just for that reason it goes from a 5 to an 8, but the voice acting was TERRIBLE, I didn't know what to say...

A suggestion that very well could have increased your score by alot...
"Unstead of using stupid circles for them to talk, why not make the light on the system (for the PS3 and Wii the disc insert, and for the 360 the ring thing) glow when their talking?

These two simple things could have easily of changed your score from being a 3.00 to being a 3.5, well that and if you worked a little more on the animation of the Keyblade, and Energy Sword (btw, Halo sucks I don't care what anyone says... but that Energy Sword was AWFUL)

Theirs my two cents, keep up the work.

[School 13 - I.A.C.W.]

Halarious...

Cracks me up, love the theme of pointlessness lol, (I fucking hated Chem A)
Still this is better than the Simpsons, the dude below me (Futsunushi) is basically a dumbass, this could only be second to something such as south park, but that would only be comedically wise, I loved the animation in this much more than any other Cartoon animation such as the shitty simpsons or SP.

Thanks for the great time,

DawnOfDusk

Nightwayfarer responds:

thanks
I didn't think that you would compare me with TV shows)
Im only 16 (and there are 1.5 months till my BD :P)