doctormellow's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[=FLOW=]

Good movie.

Just needs to be made longer, You should slow the flow of it so we getta see all of what u made.

FEAR responds:

Yeah, sorry about the speed, it was kinda fast i realized, but it looks better that way trust me :)

[MaxBox2]

Not to shabby.

But the song should have been compressed so it wasn't a 9.6mg flash. The motion tween also needs work.

[RuneScape Guardians]

Truly.

This had no significance to Runescape, you guys are really just a group of RP'ers who made up a fake storyline. No point really. And when you colored all the crap in, you forgot a strain of grain, still good animation. But a waste of my time.

[Zelda: Heroic Rage 9]

Phenominal

Well done, and I only saw this part of the series =D

[The Naruto Collab]

It was great.

But I took off points for the artist which had no talent at all (the one after the shika-Tamar fight)

Sides that sweet, didn't know the song, so I was like... kk? lol nice sides that.

[The PS3 Song!]

Nicly done.

Well put together also. I saw ur comment w/ the not having to do w/ ur opinion so I'm not going to talk about how I hate 360 out of all of em =D

Some of the repeating of the frames annoyed me, not exessivly, but enough to deem u a point (9 outa 10)

[ScientLOLojyuuichi!!]

Pretty Sweet Except

Positives: Good song, decent animation, not shabby on any points of the music video.

Negatives:
This whole flash was almost ruined at the end of the video. Putting in a random scene talking about anonymous was cool, but putting in Tom Cruise killing a random person was pointless, then him ignorantly question who Scientology was was annoyingly childish. Then it ended up showing a leader of Scientology, which is also strange because it doesn't have a leader....?

Correct: The lousy humor after the music video.

Random thing: One time when I went to view this I saw the related submissions and one of them was Naruto Yaoi or however it was spelled. Lol, made me laugh.

[beanie and defjames]

Nothing Special

Just like 4 sticks fights which each contained less than 10 damaging blows.
I'm suprised this wasn't blammed. It really had no point.

If you want to improve this, add better quality and make sure to have an object when creating a flash movie....

And another thing, was that loading screen picture stolen from stickpage.com???

defjames-sfc responds:

no they put there preloader up for download so i thought y not
use it

[Naruto Randomness 2]

Roflmao.

The only thing I could think that could be worked on would be the volume's of the voices (althought in spanish) Still, nicely done.

Deserves a 10.

[Team Dark VS Team Light]

Nothing special

-Just a single song (Utada Hikaru) Which was nothing special.
-The text was extremly blury and hard to read...
-The fight was to damn short.

What could be added.
-The song is good, but how about an English and Jap. version?
-Make the text more colorful (say a bevel'd purple colored font in not ALLCAPS)?
-Make the fight longer, not a "to be continued" after 15 second of fighting

ShadowVil responds:

that song is from kingdom hearts there is no english or jap version it's the same thing lol but i am working on the contined version and there will be longer fighting just wait and you will see